Rewrite week...

Eight weeks and seven stories in, I can say it has been a hectic learning curve. At this point I feel the urgent need to get things fixed and tidied. It's time to revise on the basis of several very welcome suggestions and some very useful guides to writing. Pronouns must go! I'll repost the stories as things move along. I'll post a new column on Wednesday or Thursday evening and then pick up with Alan Dale's DNA, Movie Night and  a new story on Sunday evening (hopefully). I'll keep on updating 'The Stream' and 'Watch this...' daily. A special word of thanks Selene M'Only and Tracie McBride for the pointers.